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Sunday, December 05, 2004
i wrote a poem kinda long ago... but i needa ppl 2 give me comments... so u noe wat to do!!!
the following will be my poem.... soz for grammer mistake...
I felt cold;
Because I thought that your warmth can keep me warm.
But it didn’t.
I felt sad;
Because I thought that your happiness can make me happy
But it didn’t.
I felt lonely;
Because I thought you will always be there for me.
But you didn’t.
When you feel cold;
I thought I could be there to keep you warm
But I can’t.
When you feel sad;
I thought I could be there to make you happy
But I can’t.
When you feel lonely;
I thought I could be there to keep you company
But I can’t.
And you know what the problem is?
You do not know my presents.
so wat do u tink?! pls give comments!! thks in advance..!!=)
love always..*
jalyn..*
aka..*
teenage drama lame ueen..*
sMiLe aLwaYs!!?=))))
jallyfish
12/05/2004 12:55:00 AM
